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Post by Admin on Oct 6, 2014 2:49:47 GMT
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Post by Anna Jeschke on Oct 8, 2014 16:42:29 GMT
Today I visited Isabella Lays Website. I loved how the website looked. It was well designed. What I did not know before was that they made their own jobs. Everyone was respected for what they did. I admire that. I also learned that Farmers used dead corps for fertilizer in their plants. It was very hard to get to the other links. Maybe in the future you could create easier access. Anna Jeschke The Occupations of Judea by Bella: sabinalay99.wix.com/jesus-project |
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Post by jorgecabezas on Oct 10, 2014 13:34:25 GMT
I visited Bella Lay’s website on occupation in ancient Rome I love how she had different section on her website. I learned that if you were a foreigner that most of the time you were captured and sold as a slave and didn’t have the freedoms of other men. Also soldier was another occupation that worked under the king, was highly respected, and was given many liberties. One thing that she could have done better was to find a less blurry picture.
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Post by juliasantee on Oct 10, 2014 21:50:51 GMT
Today I visited Bella Lay's website to learn about occupations in the time of Jesus. I liked how she had her title and sections neatly organized. I never knew that a slave's master had the right to kill him if he wanted to. I also didn't know that a carpenter was one of the most common jobs of the time period. One thing Bella could improve on is to make the font just a tad bit bigger, as some parts were difficult to read.
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Post by jallison on Oct 12, 2014 22:22:15 GMT
Today I visited Isabella’s website. I learned that soldiers collected taxes from the people in Jesus’ time. I also learned that most workers were captured slaves. What I liked most about her website was the color scheme and how she had multiple pictures instead of only one. To improve upon her website I suggest she proofreads the website because they are a few punctuation as well as spelling errors.
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Post by augustusbonacci on Oct 12, 2014 23:18:13 GMT
I read Bella’s website to learn about occupations in the time of Jesus. I loved how organized the website was. Not only did it have separate pages such as “Home”, “Collections”, and “Work Cited”, but also in the “Collections” page, there were several paragraphs on different occupations. In addition, there were great images. I learned a lot from Bella’s website. I learned that many people in Jesus’ time were slaves, and that most of these slaves were from different countries. Bella’s website structure and information was great, and her website would be even better if she made a few small grammar improvements.
Augustus Bonacci
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Post by kevinunderwood on Oct 13, 2014 14:52:27 GMT
To learn more about the different occupations in the time of Jesus I visited Bella's website. I really liked how she had more that one link on her website where you could switch between the main facts and the works cited. One thing I learned is that Jesus' father, Joseph was a carpenter. Another thing I learned was that the slaves in Jesus' time were not natives of the city but foreigners. To make Bella's website even better I would recommend fixing some grammar mistakes.
-Kevin Underwood
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Post by mackenziegriffith on Oct 13, 2014 15:27:28 GMT
Today I visited Isabella Lays website to learn more about occupations in the time of Jesus. I really liked the slideshow of pictures that was on display when you first opened up the website. I learned that carpenters were one of the most common jobs in that time. I also learned that farmers worked during the winter. The website did have some minor cosmetic problems such as me having the ability to edit it. Overall, the website looked great.
Mackenzie Griffith
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Post by Alex Calkins on Oct 13, 2014 18:32:48 GMT
Today I visited Bella's website to learn about occupations. I really liked the design and format of the website. I like the edits she put on the website to make the text emerge in a cool fashion. I learned that the people prided themselves on their occupations. Another thing that I learned is that Jesus' father was a carpenter. Something Bella would have to add would be a work citing to the pictures. I would also check some grammar and spelling errors.
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Post by doug demarche on Oct 13, 2014 20:15:43 GMT
to learn about the kind of jobs that people had in the time of jesus, I went to bella's website. I like the colors she used, it made her website look good. I learned that jesus's father was a carpenter. I also learned that carpenters were the most common occupation. There were some spelling errors that could be corrected.
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Post by mike tesmer on Oct 13, 2014 22:42:32 GMT
Today i visited Bella's website. The coloring was on spot and I liked the pictures.The thing i learned from the website is that the workers were captured slaves. Thats what i learned from Bella's website. Again the website was cool and i liked the pictures.
-Mike Tesmer
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Post by Mitchell Root on Oct 14, 2014 0:22:43 GMT
To learn more about occupations in jesus time i visted Bella's website. I liked the picture you had on the website. I learned that people prided themselves in their work and that every job was different. You could of had more information on your website.
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Post by rdelfavero on Oct 14, 2014 0:57:14 GMT
Today i visited the website of Bella. The picture and information of the website looks very proffesional. I learned that work was a big part of peoples life and that workers were mostly slaves. to improve this website i woul add a little more information or just organise it differently to make it look more imformative.
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